Reflective Essay

Author: Billy Lau // Category:
It seems as though I had done very little blog posts for in the past. I like having a blog because you get to express yourself online for everyone to see. Having a blog has changed the way I write, think, and think about writing because I don't have to do the more structured academic assignments I do in class. My writing has improved when I get writer's block and there are many reasons why I get stuck. I also have a hard time thinking about what to write about ,so I just choose a lame topic and write about that. Writer’s block also gets me stuck but I learned new ways in class that help eliminate this problem. In my blog I  wrote a lot about Justin Bieber. I didn't get a very good grade on that. I also wrote about games and I compared the Xbox 360 to the Play Station 3. On response topics, I found interesting things that I would like to have a say in. I like to express my feelings and how I feel about other people’s blogs. My blog posts are half responses to other people and half of them I wrote myself. I tried to use my list of vocabulary words in my writing but I could never really get them in. I enjoyed having a blog and discovering other student’s ideas and how they think.

I blog two times a week.  It was a requirement from my writing teacher to do this, but I enjoy blogging on my computer rather than writing with my bare hands. I enjoy completing my homework assignments online because you do not have to go to school to turn it in.  It has eased my homework because I don't have to turn in homework until Friday. Blogging has changed the way I write because I do not have to follow a single prompt. I can write however I want.  In eight grade I didn't write as much but this year I been writing every week. Writing more has helped me to get pass writer's block and it gave me more time to develop ideas throughout the week. I think differently when I write now because before, writing quick writes always gave me writer's block but now I am getting less and less of it.  I can think about the topic deeper when I write more. It has made me think differently about writing because posting blogs do not seem like a requirement anymore. I feel like I have to do it to let the world know how I feel and a way for me to express my ideas and opinions to other writers. I can write about legalizing graffiti to the life of Justin Bieber. Here’s a link to a Justin Bieber post about why people should not hate on him.  In this post, I have came up with many reasons why no one should hate on him. Many people have responded to it, and I liked reading their post of how they felt. In this I learned that there are many perspectives of views different people have. Finally, weekly blogging has changed my opinion in writing for fun and writing because you have to.

   Writer’s block really pissed me off the first time I hit into it. The first time I get it and the only time I get it is when I am doing quick writes. I have to think while I write because I can’t think first then write non-stop. Writer’s block prevented me from writing well because my head fills with thoughts not about the topic. I have learned that it is easier to write when the lights are closed and you are alone, because then there are no distractions and your mind is on the topic. Brainstorming helps organized and also beef up my ideas that I will write about. Writer’s block has taught me to brainstorm many ideas and to jot them down so if I get stuck I will have more ideas to talk about. I tend to get stuck because I do not know what details I can add in. I explain a lot at first but afterward I have nothing else to put in. Getting writer’s block occurs almost every time I write, and I have no solution. One solution I thought about was rereading the prompt and make up questions using it. Afterward I can answer those questions and add it to my writing. I think writer’s block is a road people stumble into because they have answered the prompt too concise and that it lacks imagery, details or description. Another way to overcome writer’s block is to plan out my ideas in the beginning and try to add more details just in case if I get stuck. I have an example of encountering writer’s block and not getting into the minimum word count here. This post could have gotten more details inserted in to meet the required amount of words. I reread this and compared it to other people’s essay. I noticed that it isn’t as long as theirs. Writer’s block to me is just a time when the writer just blanks out and can not think of anything else to add.



For the next quarter I hope to improve my writing and also to extend the length of my blog. I want to put more time into my blog posts but most of the time I procrastinate to the last day and my posts turns out horribly and short. I also need to include words from my vocabulary list, because I know it will help me in the future. In class I learned about redundancy and I want to exclude that from my writing. My writing posts are getting C’s, and I now know to step up my game. I can do all this by brainstorming first and start planning out my posts all throughout the week and to not procrastinate and to just start right away.  For the next quarter blog posts with these new goals, I expect my writing to improve.
 

Of Mice and Men

Author: Billy Lau // Category:
“Of Mice and Men”, is a novella by John Steinbeck it is about two men, George and Lennie who are workers searching for a new life. They moved from one farm to another, looking for work to get money and buy their own farm. They moved to a new farm and find problems with Curley, a former boxer, and his wife. Lennie was born with a mental illness, which prevents George and himself from staying on one farm without causing problems. There are a lot of conflicts that occur in this book, but the central problem is self vs. self with Lennie. Lennie is a gentle giant who never knows what he is doing. He forgets everything George says, and messes everything up.

  George and Lennie are traveling to a new job at a ranch, and many problems arise with Lennie always getting in trouble. George and Lennie got kicked out of a ranch in the past and moves on to a new ranch. Lennie is always causing difficulty for George, so now George won’t let him speak, because then the other workers will think he is crazy. “He can talk if he wants to tell you anything.”  P 25 In this quote, George is talking back to Curley that Lennie can talk if he wanted to. Lennie can’t control himself and every time he is directed a question, he turns to George for assistance. This turns out to work, but Curley is now on the look out for Lennie

  Afterward, Curley does mess with Lennie and they get into a fight. Curley gets hurt badly and now everyone goes into town to find help. Lennie stays back with Crooks, the Negro, and they talk about life. Crooks brought up a point that Lennie gets frightened about. Crooks said what if George never comes back, what will you do. “George gonna come back,” Lennie reassured himself in a frightened voice. Maybe George come back already. . Maybe I better go see.” p73 Lennie is so dependent on George that he gets aggressive at one point on Crooks, because he thought Crooks was restricting George from coming back. Crooks backs down, and Lennie goes and checks if George is here.

  Finally, Lennie commits his ultimate crime. Lennie accidentally kills Curley’s wife. He remembers where George told him to hide if anything goes wrong. He goes to the spot and waits for George. While waiting for George he starts hallucinating. He thinks about everyone yelling at him. His aunt comes in his head and starts criticizing him. “I know,” said Lennie miserably. I tried, Aunt Clara, ma’am. I tried and tried.” p 101 This quote told me that he did so many bad things that he tried not to do. He must have failed miserably on all of his attempts. After, George comes and shoots him with a gun Lennie stole. George shot him to end all his problems and to not let Lennie get hurt by Curley.

The central conflict of Mice and Men is Character vs. Self, because Lennie was born with mental problems, therefore his life will become harder and harder for him with George and everyone around him. Problems occur around Lennie is because he doesn’t know his own strength and because he gets so scared he doesn’t know what to do. Lennie needs to be supervised by George, but that leads to George having to carry Lennie’s problems along. George makes sacrifices for Lennie, because he cares and he knows that Lennie needs help internally. George is a good partner to be with because he shows hope for Lennie and tells him that they together are different than any other migrant worker. But because Lennie causes a bunch of chaos he dies thinking of him and George on the farm tending rabbits and having the best time of their lives.

Jesse's attack on Sam and me

Author: Billy Lau // Category:

I was browsing through Google reader, and I found this attack Jesse had on Sam and me about Justin Bieber...
That means please give me a break.
     What break? Justin Bieber will never give you a break, he will never stop signing his amazing songs with his amazing voice. You said that Sam and I...
 will both be very lonely if we keep trying to singing Justin Bieber's songs, because if you do then (one) you will be devastated and live a pessimistic life when he dies and (two) you'll probably want to sing his songs for a living or something, but you would barely get any money and end up as a hobo on the street.
     First, Justin Bieber is only like 2 years older than us, so by the time he is dead we are probably gonna have 2 more years to live. Anyways, by that time I would be over him and probably be obsessed with another teenage prodigy. If he dies I will be sad, but I will continue to sing his wonderful songs with joy. Second, I only sing his songs because I like them. I never said I wanted to be like him. If I did wanted to try to be like him and go on American Idol or something, I bet you I would already have a job. So I don't know what you are talking about some hobo on the streets, because that ain't gonna be me. You also said...
 ASTI probably accepted you to cure you from singing those songs all the time. You really need to rethink your life. I hope that when you had your appointment with Ms. Ahn that you didn't say "I want to be like Justin Bieber when I grow up". I'm not saying you can't be a singer, but you can't be so attached to these things. I know music is great to listen to, but I think you're going a little overboard.You need to listen to a new singer or something because you have been singing Justin Bieber for over a month. So consider this paragraph.
     First of all, Asti didn't accept me, so I could stop signing his songs. Hello, Bill of Rights: Amendment 1: Freedom of Speech. I think you need to go back to 8th grade to learn your amendments, because the first amendment allows me to say whatever and sing whatever. Second of all, why can't I be too attach to these things. I like Justin Bieber and I don't have to change. What if you like ballet, should you stop being so attached to it because no other guy is doing ballet? Why don't you think that over?  Jesse thinks he can stop Sam and I from signing Justin Bieber. I do not think that ,that is going to work. So do please try again.

Xbox 360 V.S. Play Station 3

Author: Billy Lau // Category:
There is a major debate on whether the Xbox 360 is better or the Play Station 3 is. Here are the facts:


Xbox 360 Pros:
  • Newest Xbox 360 with 250 GB cost $299.99
  • Xbox Live has more people and a great connection
  • You can own people online while listening to your favorite music
  • Xbox 360 beats PS3 in overall sales
  • Great games
Xbox 360 Cons:
  • Too many callbacks and problems
  • No Internet browsing
  • All games are on regular DVD discs,not Blu-Ray
  •  High of a failure rate
  • Large and heavy engine fans

 PS3 Pros:


  • Used PlayStation 3 with 20GB cost $299.99
  • It beats the Xbox 360 in sales, month to month 
  • Built-in Blu-ray and free online play on the PlayStation Network
  • Has Internet browsing
  • All games are on Blu-ray discs 
  • Has low failure rate
  • Great Internet connectivity
  • Quiet fan
  • Small and light controllers
PS3 Cons:
  • Few great games
  • Less people on the PlayStation Network than on  Xbox Live
  • Some disc drive problems that don’t read the discs properly or will not accept the discs
           In conclusion, I think both are very great consoles, and that they are both way better than the Wii. I currently own a Xbox 360, and I'm loving it. Sometimes, I wish I had a play station 3, because the internet is free and there is nicer graphics. Most people play the Xbox, because there are more cool games. The games I am playing now are Halo:3, Halo: ODST, Gears of war 2, and Call of Duty: Modern Warfare 2. The PS3 may have better quality then the Xbox, but the Xbox has better games. The PS3 is more expensive than the Xbox, but if you think about all the parts the PS3 has, it is worth it. The Xbox is priced at a fairly good range. Now that I explained all this, I hope you can decide to choose a Xbox 360 or a PS3.

Devin's Post

Author: Billy Lau // Category:
I found this cool quote from Devin's Blog...
   I always finish my essays last because I feel like procrastinating on those devils. I did that back in middle school. If you read the study guide essays I did over the summer, you will find them not very impressive. Another thing is that my hand writing is sort of messy. The page becomes gray because the words are smudged. Letters are stuck together and everything looks out of place.
I completely agree with Devin. He said everything I needed to say in this tiny quote. When I do my homework, I always do math first and any writing I just do last. I thats what I did in middle school. The summer readers were a pain in the butt. It was summer and I had to write like 13 essays. At one point, I thought about just not doing any of them, but I knew the consequences for that. So I did them, but they were like the worst essays I did in my life. Sometimes I didn't even know what I was talking about. They were all super short, and by reading them any one could tell, I didn't put any effort into them. I typed these essays to make them look longer, but compared to everyone else it was very short. My hand writing is very messy, so that is another reason why I didn't write them.  I been hearing that my writing is messy ever since kindergarten, and teacher after teacher complained they couldn't read my writing sometimes. In conclusion, Devin and I have very similar characteristics, and now I do not feel like I am the only one in the world who feels this way.

About Justin Bieber

Author: Billy Lau // Category:
     Justin Bieber's full name is Justin Drew Bieber. He was born on March 1, 1994 and raised in Ontario. As Justin Bieber grew older he taught himself how to play the piano, drums, guitar, and trumpet. In 2007, he sang at a local singing competition and got second place. His mom posted videos of Justin on Youtube, and soon he became popular.
     A marketing executive,Scooter Braun, came across Bieber's video on youtube. He was impressed by his singing so he tracked him down and asked his mom to let him record demo tapes in Atlanta, Georgia. She let him. After one week, Bieber started singing for Usher. Soon, Bieber was signed to Raymond Braun Media Group a group with Braun and Usher. After that, Bieber and his mother moved to Atlanta to start his career and Braun became Bieber's manager.
     Soon Bieber had his first song, One Time. The song was number 17 on Billboard Hot 100. Afterward,  Bieber's first album My World was released and it had three songs: One Less Lonely Girl, Love me, and Favorite Girl. The album went on Itunes top 40 songs list. Later on, Bieber continues his success as a singer and now he was starred on CSI. Bieber soon became so popular that now everyone is trying to criticize him. His fame will continue on and he will be one of the best singers in the world.